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Sexual confusion The sweet taste of his lips
the strong grasp of his hands
the racing of his heart
still can't quiet my thoughts of her
the sweet aroma of her
the gentle embrace of her arms
the rights of him
or her sinful wrongs
the love of them both
the selfishness of me
I'm confused wishin my mind
would just let me be
here's a way you could write this poem..
The sweet taste of his lips,
the strong grasp of his hands,
the racing of his heart.
Still can't quiet my thoughts of her,
the sweet aroma of her,
the gentle embrace of her arms.
The rights of him,
or her sinful wrongs
The love of them both,
the selfishness of me.
I'm confused...
Wishin my mind,
would just let me be.
It's only a suggestion, ya do whatever ya want......I've actually been trying to go back to my old poems and edit them cuz i never used any grammer, and some of my poems turned out way differently, but made it better....an example of one of my poems i edited is called : A relationship wanting to be forgotten, always remembered. It turned out way better than it was.....
like the poem, though a little confustion