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Distant, frozen orb,

not grey nor yellow...but BLOOD,

my depths you inspire!





(Go 0n....make it a Tanka....

I DARE you to just TRY it!!)

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"This is a test...this is only a test..."

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last updated 12 October 2010 - 5:32am
©30 January 2003 - 7:51pm — TREXPATTON
10 February 2003 - 6:16pm — saiom
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Teddy... a great haiku!!

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