Anywhere but here

I looked for you, far and near

I looked for you over there

I looked for you. But you are not there

Where ever you are, Your any place but here

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Not finished and not sure where to go from here 

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SSmoothie's picture

Short but perfectly formed, I

Short but perfectly formed, I say it is finished and wonderfully well! 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's life SIMS, but not as we know it" - ¡$&am

Leo87's picture

Well thank you both very

Well thank you both very much.

allets's picture

Search Me

Seeking him on the shore

seeing him nevermore

hoping for a meeting soon

too bad for me, he is gone.

:D

 

I like the little form - it rocks!