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Dearly beloved
Dearly beloved we gather-
Today.
We introduce-
Ms. Heartbreak to Mr. Pain.
Her love deepens-
With every winked eye.
Her dilemma-
She loves it from every guy.
He has taken apart the love from her hands.
She cared to his wounds with words that-
She's woven.
Mr. Pain knows what he needs.
But, he caters to her pleads.
Beacause, she'll leave and dream-
Her lust will become obsence.
He knows the faster he falls,
The harder he'll crash.
He bites his lip-
Slocuhes down on the love seat.
This routine is mad.
Dearly beloved,
We gathered today.
Dearly beloved:
And there was I expecting something really romantic. What a sceptical view point of marraige and it's eventual break down. Cleverly written and so cynical. I like your poem and your writing but I read in dismay of the eventual outcome.
http://www.postpoems.org/authours/a.griffiths57
sorry :( lol next time I'll
sorry :(
lol next time I'll make a happier poem lol
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You write dramatically and well. As for thematic mood? Choose the dark side or light, or in between. With your skills you have a flair for shadows and purity of point taken metaphorically - I read it five times and still I wonder at the tale behind the composition inside a wonderous style ---------- ~Allets~
:)
thank you so much