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Aboard the train of eternity
Destination unknown
Any place sound tempting
Too evil for Heaven's gates
Too angelic for Hell
The place is right in the middle
A place that's known to well
No fiery flames of torment
No holy mother of God
None of this brings satisfaction
Alone in silence and slumber

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last updated 24 October 2011 - 10:51pm
©5 July 2003 - 10:31am — drkpuzzle
17 January 2004 - 7:01pm — Anna Rowe (not verified)
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I like this poem. Many people feel this way. They don't know what way to take in life so they get suck in the middle. The rhyme in this poem is great too!

Anna

22 October 2011 - 4:43am — drkpuzzle
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Thank you for your kind

Thank you for your kind words. :)

The only real failure in life is not to be true to the best one knows.--Buddha