I noticed the little things first;

Like the way his eyes crinkled when he smiled
And the way his smile seemed to have a way to put me at ease.

Even though you were shy around me, I felt as if it weren't a bad thing. At least I knew I made you feel something,
really feel. 

Well I really loved the way you always had a better compliment, and everyday proved that you were the winner of our silly little arguments 
And slowly,
Like how the clouds shed drops of water during a drizzle,
And how ones eyelids shut after such a tiring day;
I started thinking about it.
About you. 

And eventually, it came at once. The heavy downpour and the deepest slumber of them all. 

But it didn't matter.
Cause around him;
my body itched to dance in the rain
And each time I woke up 
My mind begged to sleep again.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This is one my favorite love poems for him. I've been doing this for quite a while so make sure you leave a comment and rate my work.

hardware's picture

Good feeling

I love to read when a woman can and does express love, affection and complement the man she cares about.

Well written.

a.griffiths57's picture

    I like your poem you have



I like your poem you have written here, good write and read.