This originally had a different ending, just after the part where I talk about "my greatest foe" but the original work that has that ending (the only copy that has that ending) is sadly missing. I rewrote it mostly because I had to turn it in in highschool and didn't want to spend a week in the guidance counselor's office explaining why I WASN'T suicidal. O_o The original ending ends abruptly as the speaker closes her eyes just before the flame reaches her and she describes the feeling of the heat tickling her skin just as she lets go of everything. It was meant to show that she couldn't escape until she accepted. But on later review, I figured that my 12th grade English teacher might not take it that way. Hah! So you guys get the P.C. edited version. Sorrys! DX
Obviously (to me anyway, I hope to everyone else too) this is about a person who is haunted by one or many mistakes they have made and I tried to emphasize the way she seemed to be caught in time, running in circles in her head.
Anyway, hope you like it. XD
