Commentary

CELEBRITIES

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Shatterday

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INSIDE THE BOX

Author's Notes/Comments: 

A commentary on abuse and complicity.  Overbearing and controlling people seek passive partners and vice versa. The "box" in the first stanza was a house. The "box" in the second stanza was her mind. And the "box" in the last stanza was a coffin. The irony of the last two lines was the reason for the title, since a coffin is the final and most feared type of box.

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THE WHATEVER POEM

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This poem expresses what's wrong with the world,when people don't like how things are,but do nothing to change them.

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MIDNIGHT FLIGHT

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I have the greatest respect for air traffic controllers.  I hope the feeling is mutual!

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THE STORY OF WE YOU I AND THEY

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OLDIE MOLDIE
Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this thinking of the poor and forsaken members of our society, ravaged with hopelessness and bowed down in spirit.  I wonder if we, you, and I, the more fortunate ones, have all done our fair share in alleviating their sufferings and miseries.  

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The Night Before My Future

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Bad
Author's Notes/Comments: 

This was the first poem I ever wrote.  I wrote it for a newsletter of a camp I was in, figured I'd write something about the future since that's what the camp focused on.  I was 13.

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CIGARETTE GIRL

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BLUE LIGHT SPECIAL

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Maybe I'm watching too much TV!

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