Facebook slut???

Look at the way she walks, talks and tries to act cool,
No one would ever believe it if they knew,
Posting slutty pictures just so guys will look at you,
All I feel is just really fucking bad for you,
They all haven't a clue,
But what's really internally bothering you,
There has to be a reason for all the dumb shit you do,
Did your daddy ever love you? you ask your self,
Well he must where ever he is,
Because your pretty but just not when you act slutty,
So have some respect for your self and quit acting nutty.

-Miss. Miller

Author's Notes/Comments: 

not my best it took me 1 minute to write it. Its about girls being slutty.

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running_with_rabbits's picture

this line reads better with a

this line reads better with a slight punctuation change
"Did your daddy ever love you?" you ask your self,

and sadly I agree, I think to many girls/women have no respect for themselves these days and that they do the wrong things for attention :(


Much Love

Ashley

Seraphim's picture

Your'e going to go far on

Your'e going to go far on here; not only are you a good poet, but so far everything you write is easily related to. As a guy, I think that what girls need to realize is that how they portray themselves is how they're going to be treated..... (I know it goes farther than that but that's a scratch on the surface.) If they act decent they'll generally be treated decently; if they act like garbage, well... that's how they usually get treated. They don't realize they how they act/talk/live is an advertisement for whoever is going to be around them. Anyway, great write and keep it up!

Your Friend,
Seraphim


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xMattx's picture

You should be a rapper

I can see you being 100 times better than Lil Wayne.

v2ourstyle's picture

Omg I love lil Wayne the old

Omg I love lil Wayne the old one now he stupid but thanks. Its really hard for me to type it out because it all the words in my head come by so fast and then I forget and it.gets all messed up I need to learn how to organize my thoughts haha. Sorry for the long ass reply. Thank you!!


-Miss. Miller