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Summer Rain.

Trees hang...

Wet drapes drawing

shade across the day,

the air still,

heavy with tears,

woven 

from the night.

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©1 June 2017 - 9:06pm — sweetwater
13 June 2017 - 4:07pm — a.griffiths57
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Summer Rain

 

 

What a wonderful weave this poem is, a very good write sweetwater; you've captured so much visualy in this poem and your words a pleasure to read. 

 

 

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13 June 2017 - 5:19pm — sweetwater
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Thank you so much, that's

Thank you so much, that's very kind of you :-) Sue.

2 June 2017 - 7:42am — bishu
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Wow !!!!

Wow !!! Short yet exspressive imagery Smile Much liked.....

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©bishu 

 

13 June 2017 - 8:34am — sweetwater
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Thank you so much bishu,  and

Thank you so much bishu,  and thank you too for the picture it is perfect for the poem :-) Sue.

13 June 2017 - 1:37pm — allets
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Beautiful Imagery

 

I love the rain. Trees as drapes - nice ~Lady A~

 

 

 

 

13 June 2017 - 1:57pm — sweetwater
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Thank you Stella, we have so

Thank you Stella, we have so many behind us they are just like winter curtains that block out the light. Sue.