You always made sense when it never mattered.

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CUNTISM

The knife sat embedded in the cheese

the figs sliced open and offering themselves up

you walked out and left me holding the wine 

it was good cheese, good wine

I'm still trying figure

exaclty when you got pissed.

was it the figs? 

Fuck you.

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LostInSociety's picture

Right there

This poem made me think in the most unique way. I was perplexed at first to find a deeper meaning, then it hit me in the face.


Find yourself~

SSmoothie's picture

its not often that another

its not often that another poet can see the ironic and painfilled undercurrent and the resillence that quickly follows it... there are many dimentions in this simple work, you have made me very happy to find a few more of them than most. I love brilliant minds! hugss!


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

ramonathompsont's picture

lol werid but I liked it

lol werid but I liked it

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dearest

We must respect all postpomies. My friends are many and varied though never judged. Unpleasantness os uncalled for. I can not post on yoir poems dearest and therefore feel our friendship is one sided. Yes I am a vicious lover of poetry and love must I suffer for this small charm? 


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

osiriss-'s picture

this hurts

this hurts

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yes bourkie, it cut like a

yes bourkie, it cut like a knife because it was so unwarranted. hugss


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."