Death would be easier than sleep

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Death would come easier than sleep tonight
don't abandon me to this cushioned wasteland
Dream love come take me away and
Let's run to all our familiar dreamscapes
Make love under the moon and stars
Caress in the shallow smooth waters
Chase comets across the skies
Dance under falling stars
Tumble in wild flower mews
Hug tightly by the warm fire
still I wait enless hours to
Sweeten my day's death
Love, come to me
Bring me lead
to place upon
These eyes
Perchance
To dream
You here
With
Me

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Tired when I wrote this all annotations welcome! :D

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Wow!

I absolutely love this one!!! Great poem, my Dear! ;-)

Juggalette....MCL's picture

i like how you formed this

i like how you formed this piece!!!! im quite jealous that even tired you can write a poem that makes so much sense in such little time!! i have not been to bed yet.....and i wrote "bad memories".... not sure its completely my best..i am proud of how it turned out but it also took me about 45 minutes due to the fact that i was doing it on my phone and my phone decided to be a ninja and attack my face as i proceeded to fall asleep while writing it!!!! lol

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lol! youre beautiful and so

lol! youre beautiful and so was that poem it was a masterpiece in need of writing despite the perils! and the world is a better place for it!! ps I LOVE NINJAS!!! sorry! HugSS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

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The Bard's Quandry

~~To sleep perchance to dream, ah, there's the rub~~~I thought death was invited to substitute for sleep at first, read again and the summons of the beloved in person or IN your dream to help (leaden eyes) hasten sleep as a way of dying from consciousness (life) to go to do wonderful mews? in flower beds and among stars...or not - a poem about insomnia - or not - I love the ambiguity, makes it a multi-layered bake. - allets


 

 

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thankyou allets yes on all

thankyou allets yes on all accounts to your all seing eyes... :)


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

allets's picture

All Seeing Eyes

I'll see you in your dreams, sounds like a great outting. Also, the cup will have a poem, too rich to be denied several verses at least or a short story - wow, be well - allets


 

 

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Yeah I switch lineS for

Yeah I switch lineS for format, good idea :) hugss oh it just that sleep was hard to find, I mean death as in dying would happen easier than sleep!, and death at the end as so tired a person getting confused, blackness of sleep better than no sleep if you get me? Nah I was tired no excuse its shit! Lol :s


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."