yesing the "no"s wip 4/13/09

Lord i want to be a blessing

receiving blessings

no more guessing

done with stressing

and always Yes'ing

the "no"s keep messing

me up

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Malory Mae Joyce's picture

Simple, strong, and very meaningful.
I love this poem, good work girly.

You will mess up, so say YES
to getting back up, and not stressing it.

Goodluck.

allets's picture

the last two lines

Putting the rhyme inside made the line poetic...othewise its just rhymed prose...with subject paramount...a topic is necessary, a central theme mandated, but there is so much more...Lady A


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