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Not who I am
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2013
What now?
In the calm of this disaster
The pacing of time between ‘it’s over’ and ‘your call’
What now?
In the minutes like hours
Where sleeping’s a memory resting on your shoulder
What now?
You said friends
As if that ever happens
I said sure
As if I was…
I LOVE IT! the tittle
I LOVE IT! the tittle confused me slightly... but maybe that was because i was also reading the comments at the same time!
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sit with it the title will
sit with it the title will pop
Much Love
Ashley
OH!! Is it like, "as if i'm
OH!! Is it like, "as if I was not who I am"???
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yes, but when I wrote the
yes, but when I wrote the line I menat more as if I was sure, but it works on both levels
Much Love
Ashley
oh, so u mean like As if I
oh, so u mean like As if I was who I am
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:) I mean whatever you see in
:) I mean whatever you see in it my dear ;)
Much Love
Ashley
haha, It's a Great one!
haha, It's a Great one!
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"Not Who I Am"
"Not Who I Am"
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
wait a min! I THINK THIS
wait a min! I THINK THIS MIGHT BE BRILLIANT! I get it, it popped, took me aimlessly thinking before class avoiding what i really need to be thinking and then it was like OMG NIGHTLIGHT I LOVE YOU...YOU GET ME! this is the title...but I feel it may be lost to many....but eh
Much Love
Ashley
Ms bunny... i'm usually one
Ms bunny... i'm usually one to say oh we'll always be friends...but really....that's because people go around thinking no hard feelings means the same as "friend"...and it doesn't. Friends are a whole lot more than just "no hard feelings" and in fact....most times they GO through periods of hard feelings like its nothing. Thats why their friends, right??
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Haha!! I'm glad you got
Haha!! I'm glad you got it...but ya know what I like the most about it..? It makes the title the ending and the ending the title!!! Like at the end of it I was thinking. "as if you were not who you are".... then it just popped up. Haha!! Glad you like it...(and I'm not nuts...lol)
Well...no I am but you know...;-)
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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
exactly and I do that often
exactly and I do that often with ym titles its kinda my calling card for writting!
Much Love
Ashley
curious as to why you picked
curious as to why you picked that as the title?
Much Love
Ashley
Because it says--I said,
Because it says--
I said, "sure".... as if the writer were unsure...as if the answer was not really authentic...as if a 'friend' friendship were a step down from a romantic relationship. Otherwise don't people usually say "of course, we'll always be friends"--???
...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."
"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "
Hmmmm,
Page... I saw this & wanted to help, and maybe kick start myself ;-) Reading this, the image of leafing through pages slammed into my mind. Something with pages for a title?
hmmmmmm
yea still not the title I am looking for...almost want to cheese out and call it what now?
Much Love
Ashley
It's too good & too Rabbity
It's too good & too Rabbity not to have a real Rabbit title! ;-)
she done did good didn't she
she done did good didn't she :) <3
Much Love
Ashley
which is why we must wait for
which is why we must wait for the one it belongs to
Much Love
Ashley
:-D
Nightlite did well! The title really adds to the poem;-)
Okay, I know i'm butting in,
Okay, I know i'm butting in, but what about "As if..." Idk... I started reading and that was what popped into my head, even before I read the last line...
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