Don’t you just hate pants

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We have started hugging each other like we don’t want to stop

Like if we pull apart we may die or never touch again

Like we want to do more but fear the falling out

Like we both know we are falling for each other

But neither of us is willing to ruin the friendship

Because lets face it

You and I

We are cut from different cloth

Silk rubbing against burlap

Trying to form something fashionable



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Beavis's picture

;-)

What I love about this poem is it is so Rabbit; so balanced, so on edge. Pierce through everything, lay each thing naked, yet still see the ambiguities that confuse and manage to trip up us all. and a line like "Silk rubbing against burlap" is just to die for! ;-)

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:)

this is a good week for my 'writer's ego' it has been paid many a complement :)

 

thanks Beavis, as always, you know how to make me smile and I really enjoyed how you described my writing


Much Love

Ashley

ashes_twisted's picture

UgH~!

That ending~!

Those Lines~!

*Swoon*

 


"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo

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:)

oh I know the silk makes you wanna swoon but just saying be careful how much you move, the burlap with rub ya raw ;)


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Ashley

Astral_Tides's picture

Hah... awesome. Such a fun

Hah... awesome.

Such a fun and delectable essence here.

Love it.


"The stars awaken a certain reverence, because though always present, they are inaccessible; but all natural objects make a kindred impression, when the mind is open to their influence." R.W.E.

 

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:)

thanks tides :) 


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Ashley

bishu's picture

New introspective Respected RWR

New introspective Respected RWR. The word "burlap" reminded me of "The Hound of Baskerville"'''' glowing...


©bishu 

 

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:)

interesting.... gaint mystery dogs found only in one grove eh......


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Ashley

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Grimpen Mire Respected RWR

"Grimpen Mire" Respected RWR


©bishu 

 

nightlight1220's picture

And mostly love how you wrote

And mostly love how you wrote the last ine!! (read it 3 times so far...lol)

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

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:) 

:) 


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Ashley

nightlight1220's picture

I think you may have started

I think you may have started a new fashion trend.

http://lhcalligraphy.com/08-30-12-invitations-burlap-silk-by-blue-magpie

 

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

running_with_rabbits's picture

omg

lol what are the odds...hmmm so we could be wedding invitations :/ I feel like a new poem is brewing


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Ashley

Miss.Jenna's picture

good job :)

I lovee this!! :D

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:)

thanks glad you liked it


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Ashley

allets's picture

Love and Burlap

Silk and sow's ear - the latest fashion for the Fall. Pigs in a blanket with silk sheets and storage capacity in a burlap clutch bag - EVERYONE will be wearing them (ha!) Opposites attract and merge baby! - grinning, I am yr pal, ~Lady A~



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:)

oh allets you ALWAYS know when I need your kind words the most! and once again you have not failed in cheering up the uncheer-able! You never know your impact my love! keep being you!


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Ashley