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me in my own layers

Around the corner,
    You’ll find me.
With my reddened eyes
Sniff and sighs
stooped stature
gestureless
blank and stupified.

Meanwhile until you turn,
    I’m in front of you.
Looking brave
Lips - wide and curved
sparkles photoshopped
fresh on face
stale at heart.

Wish you could see earlier me
through the latter.

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©18 March 2013 - 7:03am — rjnmhrjn
3 May 2013 - 6:15am — PeterChristophe...
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It's heartbreaking. I love

It's heartbreaking. I love the deep sense of longing in each line.

3 May 2013 - 7:41am — rjnmhrjn
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Thanks ...  i appreciate your

Thanks ...  i appreciate your kind words and going through the emotion of the piece

18 March 2013 - 9:41am — and_hera_met_zeus
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love it!!

love it!!

19 March 2013 - 5:04am — rjnmhrjn
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Thanks a lot.. :)

Thanks a lot.. :)

19 March 2013 - 5:02am — allets
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Nice Portrait

I love your layers ~~A~~

 

 

19 March 2013 - 5:05am — rjnmhrjn
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Thanks "A" .. You ve been a

Thanks "A" .. You ve been a great inpiration...