Deeply lush gem and the bruised infinity

You are running around my head, my body buried deep in the sand.
Spinning in circles I stair straight on never blinking,
My hearts not well at this point anything could happen.
The red rushes with the flow.
To packed in I cannot move barely able to think.
Lightning strikes the land all around me
As you dances right past my line of sight once again.
Dressed in my best looking like a mess,
I am reminded of the name around my neck
How I think it was the first lie I ever knew.

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allets's picture

Too Packed In

Surreal poem - The last two lines are bliss ~A~


 

 

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Amazing!!! gee I really enjoy

Amazing!!! gee I really enjoy your works. my comments keep getting lost with the site drop outs but they pretty much mostly say great things keep on writing em thanks SS


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