We're Not So Great, You and I

Beneath cock sure smirks

With my lips, her naked jerks

She swoons over skin

Author's Notes/Comments: 

This Haiku is one of mine that I don't particularly like, but she keeps tugging on my heart saying "I want to be seen" Smile

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and_hera_met_zeus's picture

i think the title gives it a

i think the title gives it a great deal more depth than it would have otherwise.  makes me think of haikus in a new way

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U & I

The smirk gave it away. Women swoon, men are indifferent  and vice versa. The game is on!  ~~A~~