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I trod through the thick mountain of sugarcoated snow

And watch my internal breath freeze as the cool breeze takes it away

And then breathed in and warmed by another person whom I do not know of.



Who has my breath?

Can I have it back please?



Warm me up

Wrap me up

Wring me a hot towel

And throw it on my red face



Turn up the heat

Sit beside me

And lets watch the sun

As it gradually goes out of sight.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

yeahhh it snowed :) But its not the snow i like, its all frosted with ice at the top, and its too heavy. oh right.. my poem. :) Read it

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©25 December 2004 - 2:24am — newsl4ng
17 March 2006 - 8:19am — poetvg
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INCREDIBLE POEM

28 December 2004 - 1:08am — Grady Smith (not verified)
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I wouldn't change a thing. Wonderfully written and emotional.

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