Look at Yourself

July 17, 2004

 

What have you done

How has is begun

What did you do

Do you even have a clue

 

The trouble you made

Because you threw a parade

Are you happy now

Can you suddenly have a cow

 

Words said

Actions read

Your nothing but a slut

Nothing comes from your gut

 

What have you done

Do you even know how its begun

Look at what you do

How can anyone possibly love you

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a.griffiths57's picture

    This poem portrays very

 

 

This poem portrays very low self esteem, the poem is well written and a good read but it kind of brings the reader down; which I guess is the purpose of such low self esteem. Hope things improve for you.


 

 

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