Laceration

 

Inside

there are lines
Blue
like baby eyes
one chamber
pumps down to another
then crosses over
to breathe
red
like
hearts

 

Blood

in volumes

I'm inlove
with color

 

I

let it sing

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i like the sweetness here.

i like the sweetness here.  and juxtaposing it with the anatomical images makes it entirely unique

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Love this

well truth be known,

love everything you write,

you are a shining example of what a poet is

here is a weird thought

to bad I am just an old man

if I was a young woman

I'd give you something to write about

like I said weird

Peace

Dylan

ps 

the new picture suits you


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

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I have no doubts about that,

I have no doubts about that, and too bad it isn't so. Thank you for your compliment :)


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.

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Vibrant Colors Here

You can feel the heart pump blood to the lungs to be oxygenated and turned to red. Whew, move over Gray's Anatomy. slc


 

 

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Thank you Lady A! I really

Thank you Lady A! I really like this one too. 


"It is a terrible thing to be so open. It is as if my heart put on a face and walked into the world" -- Sylvia Plath.