AHH, THAT GUITAR.

Sweet notes trickle down

Like soft rain on petals,

Dripping from the strings

In a cascade of sound

To pool in my senses.



As strings vibrate

Chords shower in waves,

Overlapping and harmonising

To form a choral tide

Sweeping me along.



As the music builds

And thunders to a storm

It carries me aloft

To ride on the dark clouds

Pregnant with euphony.



Then a rainbow of tones

Changing colour through the spectrum

Delights with its beauty

Until it quietly fades

Leaving me with the gold.


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Mai Hashem's picture

WOOOOOOOOOOW, this really brought alot of memories back :D
Well written

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

I too love guitar great piece..

cuddledumplin's picture

This is excellent. For some reason, I was hearing Nick Drake as I read this, but I adore Nick Drake, so that is good. I like the rainbow image at the end because I have synesthesia and see colors and patterns when I listen to music.

Karyn Indursky's picture

This poem reminds me of a bio. of a celebrity done on television. I can see you telling the world how you got started with music. Yet, even as you speak your poetry drips from your tongue fluently. I hope your dreams come true and in the end it brings you eternal happiness.

Samantha Flynn's picture

I really enjoyed reading this :-D i play the guitar, and being that this about a guitar it makes it even cooler, keep it up!

Others' Poems's picture

Dear Eunice, I put
my favorite poems from this site
and others
at http://www.postpoems.com/members/op

If this is not ok, let me know

notes as rain pooling in the senses
is so beautiful

Ruth Lovejoy's picture

I too play guitar and really enjoyed this piece

poetvg's picture

good work .