Magical Night

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Lovespeak

I'll remember this night
when we hold hands tight
But you have to let go
'Coz we see your bro

 

I don't really know why
but I tell you what
I think I see a sign
when you smile like that

 

Never forget this night
when we eat this food
I never ate in my life
yet they taste so good

 

We run across the street
Even if the light's still red
My heart is fast to beat
There are things left unsaid

 

This is a magical night
Though the moon is not bright
I want to feel your dress white
And that we fly like kites uphigh

 

And as we go to the cab
I am starting to go sad
I don't want this to end
I can't seem to comprehend

 

Author's Notes/Comments: 

My debut poem
If you have a Facebook account, view this and other poems on my account James Denolong Dela Cruz

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heatherburns35's picture

  Nicely written.  The

 

 Nicely written.  The beginning of a lovely affair dear friend.  keep on writing.

 

workm's picture

Good one

your poems for me, there good to read. You set a story, sad or glory. Just keep going, what ever comes, just write it down, and read it I found. A nice read, let it be, with mind and soul, then you know.  Peace my man..

Silver__lining's picture

good piece, just remember we

good piece, just remember we all get better with time. ive been writing for over a couple years and it only gets better every experience.


can you hear me now?

9inety's picture

Great work!

Peace
Dylan


"One of the best results of life, is the torment of love"

Dylan Eliot

ginsywilde's picture

Thank you!

Thank you for reading it!

-James Dela Cruz

Morningglory's picture

I absolutely love it! Thank

I absolutely love it! Thank you so much for asking me to read!! I am off to read your others... :)


Copyright © morningglory

ginsywilde's picture

Thank you for reading too!

Thank you for reading too! I really appreciate it!

allets's picture

Reread 04-11-15

Good poeting ~slc~

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