unfinished 2

I once thought this world was a beautiful place,
But the beauty was stolen from my eyes replaced with hate.
Veins pumping with resentment and rage,
No trust left in my heart self hating so much,
Im stuck in a cage.

Betrayed by the ones who should love you the most,
But i still stood strong, I had confidence to boast.
But boy after boy, used me for a screw,
Then i opened up my heart one more time,
Trusted a man, but his love was untrue!

This ugly world held me one last friend,
Had never hurt me would never pretend!
Loved me for who i was took me in as her own,
Trusted me with everything,
Finally gave me a happy home.

But she was going through pain and hurt,
Her partner was abusive she was always alert.
Exhausted

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cevance's picture

Very straightforward and

Very straightforward and harsh. Full of emotion, which is good. I do enjoy what you put to page. Thank you for allowing me to see the sincere person that you are.

Imprinted-soul's picture

Thank you, its really nice to

Thank you, its really nice to know im not alone. Yeah i really do hope writing about it will help because counselling and all the rest doesn't seem to make me feel any better for some reason!! But hopefully we both get there in the end:) Thank you for your feedback, always appreciated!! And im very happy to hear you have recovered from your dark past events of such..
Skye:)

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Thank you so much for reading

Thank you so much for reading my works!! I appreciate it very much. Im really gkad you liked this peice, ots obviously unfinished. But things are really crazy for me right now and im having trouble wording the emotions im feeling..
But i need to write something soon, i know it will make me feel better:):)

SSmoothie's picture

Life is pretty screwed up

Life is pretty screwed up like that hey? I hope she finds peace with you there, and the courage to be all she is meant to be as you will be. When we love ourselves with acceptance and we ourselves are all we need to feel good, then true love manifests patiently waiting and wanting, happy to wait to consummate the greatest gift with their soulmate. Make em wait Hun, it separates the men from the dogs! ;) best of luck SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

Imprinted-soul's picture

She is such a beautiful girl,

She is such a beautiful girl, with one of the most special souls i have ever seen!! Ive tried to help her for a whole year now, i was living with her and her partner and kids. I was cooking cleaning and nurturing her young. Whilst supporting her emotionally, trying to help her escape her partners throll he had upon her..But in the end she asked me to leave, beacuse i wouldn't put up with her partner blaming me for being a victim of sexual abuse..To me he is a disgusting pig but to my darling sister, sadly he is her Prince Charming!!

Hahaha, yes ill be sure to make them wait from now on..No more wasting time with Pigs!!!
Thank you for your feedback Ssmoothie:):) Always appreciated!!

RoC's picture

Damn straight!

Real men seek it as a bonus, not a means
Because real men want beyond the sheets
A real man waits until you say it's time
Because a real man knows the wait's worthwhile
A real man will always stick around
When you're giddy, angry, when your happy, when your down
A real man doesn't leave, until he's told to go
And your real man is out there, waiting to bring you home


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

Imprinted-soul's picture

Thankyou RoC!! I really

Thankyou RoC!! I really appreciate it..And i really do hope there is a real man out there waiting for me..I have wasted far too much time on scum bags haha..I just want to be appreciated:):)

RoC's picture

Then...

Make them all earn your love.


"Music is a universal language and needs not be translated. With it, soul speaks to soul" - Songsterr

allets's picture

RoC's right

Patience is critical, give the man time to earn you, to respect and want to see you as the treasure that you are. Heal first, then happy hunting ~Lady A~