You, Perfect Murderer

I believe,

I knew you.

Your prefect crimes.

Assume that I'm only-

A speck in time.


This scene is just a metaphor-

For blood sucking and bruises


You say that it's a phase-

And you'll be fine.

So, quote to me over again-

Your heart breaking traits will never end.


Your murderous lair-

Your victims tears glisten in your hair.

It pains me.

But , I'll be fine.

Swimming in your fortune.

Their graves are red, crimson and deep maroon.


And if your secret spreads-

This is the way it ends.

Just come back home.

Leave the hearts alone.


All of your dilemmas-

Make me weak and tremor.

Bloodly screams and moans.

When your world turns black-

Due to your flack and lack.

Remember you were told-

Dust grinded with bone.

nightlight1220's picture

Reeks of inner turmoil...then

Reeks of inner turmoil...then I read the tags...

What helps is to see family as people we chose to be in our lives prior to birth, so our soul could gain the additional spiritual knowledge we need to get past whatever torment may befall us. You have a very "black and white" way of laying out your thoughts as emotion in clear cut words. 


I like the first verse the best, and your reference to being a "a speck in time" we all really just are. 




...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "


EvieTravieAllie's picture

:) thank you

:) thank you

Morningglory's picture

Thoroughly enjoyed reading

Thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Nice work.

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allets's picture


I have never explored that subject with this kind of depth. An evolving art this, subject trumping artistry - but in time, mastery. A great platform from which to launch a career in poetics. Best line: "...your victim's tears glisten in your hair..." I hope this is all metaphorical.  ~allets~




EvieTravieAllie's picture

lol yes, it is alllllll

lol yes, it is alllllll metaphorical


thank you