Driving

Im driving in my car,

Listening to black vail brides,

not driving very far,

I can't stop to think,

about your beautiful face,

 your taken me to other places,

I didn't think could be true.

 

So tomorrow, 

we can wait for all those time,

Come tomorrow,
I want you in my life,

I am not afraid to get to close to you

because everything feels so right,

I just wanna lay down with you,

and kiss you all night.

 

I don't want you to be,

afraid that I am going to leave,

I don't want that to accure,

I just want to make you my girl.

 

So give me your hand,

let's make this our plan,

let's write a love story,

and we will make sure it goes,

the way we plan.

 

Because I don't want you to leave,

its just so great to be,

with you on my mind,
I want you to be mine.

 

Here is my heart,

please take care of it,

I don't want to quit.

 

MY LIFE WAS ALL A CRAZY SIGHT!!!!

BUT I AM FEELING SO GOOD!!!!!

 

I am on cloud 9 tonight,

driving I feel so right,

it is the best feeling inside,

knowing that your mine.

 
Author's Notes/Comments: 

Poetry for the lovers soul. 

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saiom's picture

  May everyone feel as good

 

May everyone feel as good as you do.. 



 

 

patriciajj's picture

Some of the most beautiful

Some of the most beautiful compositions are spontaneous, and these rapturous, soaring lyrics are a perfect example. The authentic, explosive emotions of "a new love story" are palpable in each sweeping line. A truly captivating heartsong. 

elliot_jordan2003's picture

Wow thank you so much for

Wow thank you so much for those kind and heart warming words. I appreciate it