Uncorked

I bottled my love. For years I kept it from the world.
And I became an angry young man who others
Thought had already accepted old age. That I'd
Die alone never feeling the touch of a woman.
On this went and my heart forgot how to beat and
I grew to have more in common with the dead then
The living. I let the darkness swallow me and all feeling
Left me. I knew not of happiness, sorrow, or even
Anger anymore. I accepted this and thought no more
On it. Then she came into my view and this girl
Made this statue laugh and veins long dry began to
Flow with life again. She caressed my face and I felt
Something move in my chest as she uncorked my
Bottle now my love won't stop overflowing.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Inspired by ReilaMorello's Bottling it Up.

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a.griffiths57's picture

    Nice write and

 

 

Nice write and imaginative, re-kindling the love of life as well as of love itself, wonderful.


 

 

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Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

I've lost my bottle...

I've lost my bottle...


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

bishu's picture

Very nice imagery Mr Diamond and the feel was also good

Very nice imagery Mr Diamond and the feel was also good.Reminded of the statue of "THe Happy Prince"


©bishu 

 

ReilaMorello's picture

Statues

Have the most interesting stories to tell, though they are perhaps the saddest. If all the statues of the world could speak, they would tell of seeing pain unimaginable and also the purest of loves. Sculpted from experience, time and the elements, they are incapable of interacting with the life that surrounds them. But when life is breathed into them again...beautiful things happen. Absolutely lovely and moving write, diamond!

allets's picture

Happy Endings Rock

You have a talent for writing despair and loss, but then I hear there is touching and a female on the scene in a great ending, may it last until death take one of you - Lady A