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2021 You unlock the best of me
the 'me' you so pine
when we believe in the best of one another
Only then
can the sum of our parts
exceed the standards of exceptional hearts
and I become enough for you
Until then
fault me all you want for not
tearing down your own walls in heated pursuit
until you see a shared truth
and until the wild hair along your face
resembles the deepest roots
I'm going to defend
like the rock that I am
I won't move
beautiful
profound poem about
love's metamorphosis
in making 2 into 1
You're too kind :) thank you
You're too kind :) thank you
wonderful
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'Only then
can the sum of our parts
exceed the standards of exceptional hearts
and I become enough for you'
how many hundreds of millions have 1 partner feeling insecure.. is
the thought your line sparked in me
Apologies for the delayed
Apologies for the delayed reply but I appreciate you stopping by and giving this a read :) yea, I was (rightfully) getting some distant vibes from a girl that I liked and there are few things that knock you off your game than feeling insecure in front of somebody you like, heh.
In hindsight, it was justified cuz she has since started a new relationship the past month or so. It's clear she didn't feel the same, but that's ok. I didn't allow myself to get too swallowed up in the hope of something working out and it made the truth more palatable. Eh.
Deep Blue
In rare form. Tell her what you need. Communication clear. Good write. ~S~
Thank you, lady :)
Thank you, lady :)
"until the wild hair in your
"until the wild hair in your face / resembles the deepest roots"
Beginning in the fields of botany and horticulture, I love the clever, beautiful way you expressed metaphoric connection between the human existance and that of the tree, including the parellels between the seen and unseen.