Your Loss


What we had was real

What we had could not be denied

Well, what I felt

Its too bad you didn't realize

That this was until I lost faith

For months I kept this flame

Until you burnt me

By not realizing my love

And the moment you do

I had let it die within me

And had started another relationship

It was only about a week old

But I didn’t want to allow

This one to get away

Just because you said 'jump'

Yes, there were many things that

I could have done differently

But there were many, many

Things you could have done too

No, I am not like you

Yes, I am similar, but not the same

So, this is the last poem

I'm wasting on you

Because after this, you are

Out of my head



Written on


May 23, 2014

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I wrote this for an ex. Yes, I did get back with him about a month later, well at least I tried to.  But he couldn't get past the fact that I dropped him. In the end, it was his loss.

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ThatSingerSongwritergirl's picture

Wow that was very powerful!

Wow that was very powerful! You're right it is his loss. :-) Now would you mind taking a look at some of my song lyrics and please telling me what you think of them? Thanks in advance!♡♥

crimsonangel24's picture

I will and thank you for your

I will and thank you for your comment.

Right now I'm having amnesia and deja vu at the same time. I think I've forgotten this before. - Steven Wright

People like you are the reason people like me exsist. Out of a song of the same title by a band called 'Say Anything'

allets's picture

I Like This One Too

"...this is the last poem I'm wasting on you..." U rock and rant well! ~a~