To unlock a riddle.

I been dreaming long,

longer than you all along,

over the memories of us,

very patient for you to see thus.

 

Every year we fall more,

young but I know what for,

our hearts are made to love,

under all the hurt that comes above.

 

Never will I leave you be,

I've become attached to you and me,

cause you treat me sweet and right,

karma some times makes us fight.

 

On and off we feel at times,

love we have will never die,

always here to bust your crimes,

sure enough it will all be fine.

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palewingedpoetess's picture

Very young, sweet, innocent and hopeful but so intelligent too

I really liked this and it wasn't overly common and sing song like. Just 17 and already this talented. Do keep writing. Imagine the collage of poetic memories you will have when you are 27, 37 or even 45 gasps lol my age now........... I truly enjoyed reading your poetry. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.

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:)

Awww, Thanks! ^_^ Maybe I'll look into that... Sounds like a lot of fun.

I'll keep writing, it may not be every day, but the words never stop coming either.


K.A.