Welcome 2014

Welcome 2014

 

WELCOME 2014

 

Old haggard passed away peacefully at three six five

Fourteen ushered amidst fun-making and revelry

Stroke of midnight- thirteen gasped and died

Shoved into an undecorated dark cask –thrown away

Never  ever to return to pleasure and torture

Newborn welcomed under the cold starlit sky

 

Stars were sad – eclipsed by fireworks smoke

Happy New Year was wrought in the night sky

Waters of the dark oceans shone new reflection

Yesterday today & tomorrow merged in time

A moment of happiness then again crawling in slime

The sun shines the same--  earth gathers grime

 

©bishu

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PeterChristopherRaymond's picture

Fantastic imagery.

Fantastic imagery. Beautifully personafying the old and new years.

bishu's picture

Thank you Mr Peter C for your kind read

Thank you Mr Peter C for your kind read


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Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

Very nice and very true. I

Very nice and very true. I enjoyed the personification of the year. Creative.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

nightlight1220's picture

That was good. Really enjoyed

That was good. Really enjoyed it. You can clearly imagine the old, decrepid scoundrel making his way off stage... wonderful, Bishu.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "

 

bishu's picture

Thank you very very much nightlight dovely and diamond

Thank you very very much nightlight dovely and diamond for your reading of my scrapped scrabble.


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allets's picture

Haggarded 2013

I am always glad to be alive another year. 2013 as an old hag hits close to home, you know. (Smile). Nice weaving for the new year-enjoyed how you brought together vids and comments as one time merged into another ~A~

 

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bishu's picture

Truly happy to have your read and weighty comment Respected Mm A

Truly happy to have your read and weighty comment Respected Mm Allets.Its really a wonder intellectual people read my scrappy words :) Wiiiideee smile from a small crawler on terra firma trying to play scrabble


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