Sorrow

 

I am a paved road, a good intention.

Hell is where you confine me.

I only meant to ease your grief

your business is your own.

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If what I did and said caused pain

I know you suffer best alone.

I walked hard against your heart

and left deep prints as scars.

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I wounded you, became a scab

and turned into a worthless mark

to remind you I had no my regret

to have opened your wounds at all.

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allets

10-12-13

6:30a

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a.griffiths57's picture

    Rejection and being

 

 

Rejection and being overlooked is awful, no wonder you are sorrowful. I hope you find the right one soon. Well written poem that I enjoyed reading.


 

 

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bishu's picture

Respected Mm Allets

Respected Mm Allets.This is exactly how I feel when I put comments on the painstaking works of other poets on this site.I remember someone say somewhere(A great person I don't remember who) "Go easy on criticism" Thanx for reminding!!!!!!!!!!


©bishu 

 

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What I Was Thinking

Hurtful remarks, mild ridicule, and back stabbing - yeah, that's it  & criticism too much too yep- allets


 

 

running_with_rabbits's picture

oh allets!

that feeling sucks

I can relate to this right now and let me just say you captured it rather well!

LOVED the first line! it just sank in me!

 

 


Much Love

Ashley

Diamond_Wills_New_War's picture

Sometimes you can hurt

Sometimes you can hurt someone and not even know it- Bob Dylan
Perhaps that doesn't apply directly to your piece but you reminded me of how the words of our loved ones can have such a deep affect on our hearts and souls. Especially when it's a gray matter and there are differing opinions.
Well written.


Long days and pleasant nights

Diamond

bishu's picture

Me is a mundane happy sailor sailin n the marsh

Me is a mundane happy sailor sailin n the marsh.God is good & always right.It's my ignorance that I don't understand ~~~ Glory to God~~~~~


©bishu 

 

nightlight1220's picture

This is touching and so deep,

This is touching and so deep, Allets. Just how we feel when someone projects their pain onto us. -peace-

 

Never regret!!! Good reason for everything!! God doesn't do wrong. (He uses us for that..*giggle*)

 

Luv you, allets.

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...and he asked her, "do you write poetry? Because I feel as if I am the ink that flows from your quill."

"No", she replied, "but I have experienced it. "