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the salt lens

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commentary

 

 

The Salt Lens

 

They ground the crystal
with salt in the slurry,
each grain a star’s ghost
dissolving into glass.

 

Through it,
I could bring Saturn close enough
to see the shadow of a moon
crossing its face —

 

but the lens fogged
on nights when the sea‑wind rose,
salt reclaiming
what it had given.

 

At its clearest,
I saw my own eye
reflected in the dark between its rings,
and knew the map I sought
was also looking back.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Author's Notes/Comments: 

Margin gloss (in an astronomer’s hand):

 

 

 

In some early glassmaking, sodium salts were used as flux to lower the melting point of silica.
Salt clarifies — and clouds — the lens.

Saturn’s rings are not solid — they are countless particles, each with its own shadow.

 

 

 

 

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the loom of salt

Folder: 
bridging poems

 

The Loom of Salt

The warp is taut,
white as a winter shore.

I pass the shuttle —
each weft a coastline

I will never walk again.

The selvedge darkens;
the cloth drinks the tide,
and begins to vanish.

 

 

 

 

 

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the astrolabe of regret

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bridging poems

 

The Astrolabe of Regret

I set the brass to north,
the needle quivers —
a tremor I pretend is wind.

 

Each degree a year
I failed to turn back.

 

At dusk,
the fixed star
is only a smudge of ash.

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Margin note: “Merchants once navigated by these same stars; some never returned.”)






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the alliance road (prequel)

Folder: 
Period Personages

 

 

Prequel: The Alliance Road

(Levantine Chronicle — Prelude)


Croesus still wears his crown,
the Pactolus still runs gold,
but eastward the horizon darkens.

 

Messengers ride from Sardis,
hooves drumbeat the spine of the world —
through Cilician gates,
past Tyre’s purple looms,
down the coast where cedars lean to the sea.

 

In Gaza’s dust they change horses,
in Pelusium’s shadow they bow to the Pharaoh.
Gold meets gold,
and the bargain is struck:
Lydia and Egypt,
two suns to hold back the rising east.

 

The Levant listens —
its markets thick with rumour,
its ports weighing the wind.
Phoenician oars dip in and out of the tide,
carrying news faster than any envoy.

 

In Yehud, the elders speak softly:
alliances are walls built far away,
but the armies that test them
march through your own fields.   

 

The road is busy now —
grain for the Nile,
timber for the palaces of Sardis,
and in the other direction,
whispers of a king in Persia
who does not wait for spring to make war.








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Author's Notes/Comments: 

 

Historical scaffolding

  • Croesus–Egypt alliance: Herodotus records Croesus forging ties with Pharaoh Amasis II of Egypt, as well as Babylon, to counter Persian expansion.

  • Levantine Corridor: The diplomatic and trade routes between Lydia and Egypt ran through the Levant, bringing troop movements, envoys, and goods — and drawing small states like Yehud into the orbit of great‑power politics.

  • Yehud’s perspective: Though under Babylonian control at the time, Yehud’s leaders would have been acutely aware that any Lydia–Egypt–Babylon coalition against Persia meant military traffic and political tension along their own narrow strip of land.

 

 

 

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Croesus in the Comment Box

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commentary

 

Croesus in the Comment Box

(a companion to “Poems for Money…”)

 

Croesus, old coin‑king,
you sit in my comment box
polishing your metaphors in gold leaf,
telling me the platform fee is “just the cost of doing art.”

 

But I’ve seen the gates,
how they swing only for those
with a credit card in the lock.
I’ve heard the hallow of poems
that never make it past the paywall,
their syllables still warm in the mouths
of poets who can’t afford
to spit them into the feed.

 

You say, “What’s a few coins for immortality?”
I say, “What’s immortality to the unheard?”
In Lagos, in La Paz, in Lahore,
there are verses that could split the sky,
but the sky here takes payment in advance.

 

Croesus, you measure worth in minted weight;
I measure it in the tremor of a line
that makes a stranger’s chest ache.
Your treasury is full,
but my currency is breath —
and breath should not be billed.

 

Still, I post what I can,
slipping lines through the cracks
between your gold‑plated rules,
hoping one will land in a reader’s hands
like contraband joy.

 

And if you ask me again
why I won’t pay to be heard,
I’ll tell you this:
because the richest poem I know
was written in the dust,
read aloud to the wind,
and carried farther than your coins could ever reach.

 

 

 

 

in the swelling tide

Folder: 
reworked vintage

 

 

"—in the quiet tide"


an unread poem
is unwritten poetry
ink still dreaming in the vein,
a slow current beneath the skin
where no light has yet entered.

 

Pages breathe in the dark,
their margins uncreased
by any gaze,
their fibres holding the faint salt
of the tree’s first rain.

 

They live in the quiet tide
before the pen descends,
in the pause
between heartbeat and word,
where silence folds itself
into a listening shape.

 

In the shadow‑scent of paper
                             waiting
to be touched by thought,
you can almost hear
the hush of unwoken syllables
turning in their sleep.

 

Some drift closer
to the shore of speech,
their edges foaming with consonants,
                 then slip back
into the mind’s undertow —
a retreat as deliberate as arrival.

 

Perfect in their unspilled form,
they are a library of ghosts,
each spine uncracked,
each title a tide‑mark
on the inner coast.

 

                              And we,
keepers of this unbroken harbour,
                                  carry them —
the weight of what has not yet been said,
the shimmer of what may never be —
bound in the quiet tide
    that moves through us,
               and returns,
   and moves again.

 

 

 

 

 

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The Wizard of Sand

Folder: 
Dead Poets

 

 

I am not the benevolent Oz, great or otherwise
no levers behind velvet, no emerald gates to dazzle the credulous —
only the stubborn machinery of my own making,
a few cogs greased with irony,

 

    a crank that squeaks in the key of

                 don’t take this too seriously,
                         until the hum you mistake for a hymn
                    becomes the wind over a toppled statue in the sand.

 

Once, its face wore the smirk of a ruler certain he’d outlast the sun.
The words at its base still shout about greatness
but there’s nothing left to rule but air and grit.

 

Your fawn‑eyed devotion is touching,
in the way a moth’s devotion to a porch light is touching,
and just as doomed.

 

Look on my works, ye Mighty — and bring a broom;
                             the dust is winning,
and the curtain you thought was closing
was only the desert swallowing the stage.






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Author's Notes/Comments: 

 

 

 

I am not the benevolent Oz, great or otherwise — no emerald gates,

no velvet levers — just a crank that squeaks in the key of don’t take this too seriously

until the hum you mistake for a hymn turns out to be wind over a toppled statue

whose base still shouts about greatness while ruling nothing but sand;

so look on my works, ye Mighty — and bring a broom, the dust is winning.





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in the quiet tide

Folder: 
backburner results

 

The Silence Between Lines

 

Unread poems

are unwritten poetry —

ink still dreaming in the vein,

 

pages breathing in the dark,

their margins uncreased

by any gaze.

 

They live in the quiet tide

before the pen descends,

in the pause

between heartbeat and word,

 

in the shadow‑scent of paper

waiting

to be touched by thought.

 

Some drift closer

to the shore of speech,

then slip back

into the mind’s undertow —

 

perfect in their unspilled form,

a library of ghosts

bound in the quiet tide

we carry.

 

 

 

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misunderstood butterflies

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commentary

 

the scrolls stare back like a shopfront window
where the mannequins wear my metaphors,
   price tags swinging from their wrists.


           You didn't shake their wrists,


           but I saw it nonetheless

      tags fluttering away like pale,

    misunderstood butterflies.





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