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i love it when i experience the crispness of a crackling dawn.

Ok, I know this one is all over the place, and it could use some tightening up and I will get around to it, but even in this state I think it works. Think of it as an overture. *********** I think the aarvark bit was a stumble, but I haven't been able to figure out how to get the humor in without it, so thus it stays until I do.

This was a response to someone's observations at a cafe.

I transposed the 4th and 5th lines, but other than that it is as originally set out. There seems to be a line missing at line 7 but I can't seem to remember what it should be. I often look at it and feel it should continue, but I just as often feel that it stops where it needs to and makes it's point by seeming to just hang there.

I wrote this for somebody who was depressed, but I don't think that they ever read it.

Something that I whipped up a long time ago right when I started doing this sorta stuff.