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My Fault...I'm Sorry
To have and to hold, for better
or for worse; these are more than
words to me, more than simple verse.
I screwed up I know, but my love for you
is strong, I just got kinda nervous
I know that I was wrong.
Yesterday is gone is tomorrow lost too?
Can we put this behind us,
Can we start anew?
I love you so much, for all eternity.
Please forgive me
Please give me another chance
I AM SORRY
Jeff,
I REALLY liked this one. the rhyming is smooth and natural... excellent job. The heart of it really comes through. My only suggestion would be to fix some of your surface issues... like the way its typed out. Making it into consistent 4 line stanzas might help. Excellent Writing.
Lindsay
I love the topic, and I think you sound really sincere, but it kinda sounds like you're trying a little too hard to write. Just let it come out when you feel it, you can't force yourelf to write if you're not motivated.