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Is this love?

  You say that you love me.

   Then you yell at me.

  You say that you love me.

   Then you don't come home.

  You say that you love me.

   Then I find other women's number's in your pockets.

  You say that you love me.

   Then I find a condom in your pocket.

  You say that you love me.

   Then you leave me crying.

  You say that you love me.

   Then you say that I don't do anything right.

  You say that you love me.

   Then you leave me waiting for you.

  You say that you love me.

   Then why can't you talk to me.

  If this is the way you love someone then remind me not to make you hate me!

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©1 July 2003 - 4:22am — wookie_eeyore
10 June 2007 - 6:44pm — fighter4life
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Great write, especially the last line.

2 December 2006 - 6:11pm — Break Away (not verified)
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this is really a great poem, i loved it too...keep ur hopes up :)

6 March 2007 - 6:32pm — poetvg
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awesome work
on this poem
u hooked it up :*)

12 November 2006 - 10:02am — Eddie Gain (not verified)
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kinda amateurish

30 June 2004 - 9:58pm — munchkin
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trust me hun.....i know exactly how you feel that's similiar to the relationship i'm in right now...great write

26 June 2004 - 10:05am — nightwolf
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Is I from a moon lite beach. take out all the hate and that should be me. lol. sorry for the way things are going.. chin up they do work out. nice write.

22 July 2006 - 2:39pm — Cat Astrophe (not verified)
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I absolutely love this poem. (And I really do mean "love.") People throw that word around so much nowadays and have no idea what it really means. Nicely written.

14 October 2007 - 11:19am — Lisa Marie Canfield (not verified)
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i like this! no that is not love.