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Serious Time
Just a illusion
Never to be understood
Fast or slow
Long or short
Never knowing
Timing could not be worse
Too short
Never lasts long
By the blink of an eye
Past or Future
Seconds and minutes
Hours and days
weeks and months
years and centuries
All life holds to it
Time
i really liked the way you
i really liked the way you structured this.... it feels very fast paced.... as if the rapidity of time is manifesting itself in your work.... or at least that's just my take on it... quite excellent... especially considering the concept of time escaping us is a mature thought that most people at a similar age... don't seem to grasp... an applause to you and your poem ^_^
thanks
its a great poem now. your very welcome for the help. and thanks for helping me out
here's some help
time
just an illusion
never to be understood
fast or slow
long or short
never knowing
too short
never lasts long
timing could not be so wrong
for it sometimes goes too fast
and before you know it
things are of the past
hope you like it so far and i hope this helps you to add more to it
very good
this was good but maybe add a little bit more to it to be great. you started it off good but it doesnt seem to be done. i feel there could be more.