wat did i do?

love is pain

sooner or later

you'll know wat that means

u broke my heart

u set me free

u wanted nothing

to do with me

i sat there crying

wondrin wat i did wrong

was it sumthin i said

or was it the things i did

u didn't tell me

all you said

was a lonesome goodbye

and walked out da door

out of my life...

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Amanda HugnKiss's picture

hey, nice work. i liked it alot. i really loved this part.

"love is pain
sooner or later
you'll know wat that means"

keep writing, buddy.
-manduh

Kristen Davis's picture

My boyfriend just broke up with me like this as well. I wish he could just tell me why. But life is unfair a lot of the times.. I like that your poem is in all lowercase it makes it seem as if no words are important that they are all equal to each other.