Zoran

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Zealous waves of like-heart,
Over distant shores yet so near.
Remember, you are my life's chart,
And Skipper to the squalls I must bear.
Navigate our course to start...

 

9/27/11

 

 

 

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palewingedpoetess's picture

I take it this chap is the current Captain of your heart eh Shye

lovely ditty. He is the ship maybe and you are his sail. So now you can walk around singing to yourself I am sailingggggggggggggggg....... oh I am sailinggggggggg. smiles. I adore the name Zoran it sounds romantic. I use to in my teens want to write a romance novel and have the enigmatic man be named Soren Windgate..... Funny you should get to know a Zoran. Lucky lady........... hope he is as wonderful as you make him out to be in this less is more poem of yours. Now don't be too shy Shye. winks. great song by Kagagoogoo (by the way) 'Too shy' look it up on you tube. You'd enjoy hearing it I'm sure. Loved the poem was glad to see something of yours. Sincerely, Melissa Lundeen.

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Thanks Melissa! I like the

Thanks Melissa! I like the name Zoran too. He is a " less is more " man :) This is my first acrostic poem attempt ( I hope it qualifies that? ). The beginning letter of each line reads ZORAN going down. Yes, he is my Captain, and the our sails' course is our destination. I, my dear friend,  is the ship he will navigate... Funny, words came easily on my poems for him. He is special :) 

Thank you for the links! I'll check on the song  :) 


Shye

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Zoran

Works well as an acrostic poem - I saw it immediately and thought interesting name. The sea, ship, sailing motif works out nicely too - I love sea imagery. Will read more. ~allets~

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p.s. Thoren Windgate is a great name for the protagonist in a romance novel. M, you should try a short story so as not to waste the wondrous name. xoxo ~a~