Please Leave Me A Note!

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Friendship

If you're reading my poems, please leave me a note,

A little dot or period, will just be as good,

You just don't know the feeling, you make me feel,

When opening my inbox,your names are there.



If you love my poems,then be gentle with your words,

A little Hi or Hey, will always do the trick,

And if you put some flowers, some winkeys or a smile,

I will always be grateful, and remember you by.



So please come in and rest, your weary little heads.

And try to read my poems,and somehow you might see,

A poem so familiar, A poem from me to you!






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Miss Nameless's picture

I enjoyed the first two and I think your poem would survive without the third one.~K~

Afzal Shauq's picture

If you love my poems,then be gentle with your words,
A little Hi or Hey, will always do the trick,
And if you put some flowers, some winkeys or a smile,
I will always be grateful, and remember you by.

hmm well write..and here is my mesage that, your poetry is touching hearts, and making place in deep inside..its a good poem with rich idea and sweet expression .. liked it and read few times and enjoyed ...sure felt too..very great job