Graduation

Summer saunters

But its breath is

On my back

 

Sky was the night

Turning men to wolves

And some to love

 

Frightened flowers

Hiding from the dark

Low the moon turns

 

Washed and out numbered 

Not without your favor

We swam naked in the lake

 

Flood had caught us

Unaware we 

Stayed up late mops in hand

 

I always knew what I wanted

 

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"Sky was the night Turning

"Sky was the night

Turning men to wolves

And some to love"

 

 You packed a cyclone of memories and emotions into that delicate and powerful stanza.

 

The entire poem is an invocation of yesterday with all its fierce beauty, drama and passion, and your superb style—spare, clean and precise—brings it to life as if we are there and we are you. Stunning work.