Comfortable Collision

There is nothing about you that is new to me.

We sleep on domestic soil ~~ it is embedded in our souls.

Sweet submissions.



We breath static air, it invigorates us.

Your thoughts, like your fingers, invade me,

almost before you speak them.



In solitude, our waves pound against each other,

visiting familiar shores. I linger in the

warmth of your compliances.



How is it that you came so near and did not drift?

I drift into the depths of you, deeper and deeper, until

I rest, lying here in the thunderstorm of your emotions.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

to know you is to love you...

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allets's picture

Nice!

Just nice - slc


 

 

Karyn Indursky's picture

I like the image you create of yourself colliding with the man of your dreams, desires, life. You kept it short, sweet, and to the point while painting pictures of the romance, love, and unity going on. It was as beautiful as your soul.

Dianne V.'s picture

your beautiful words. . .the images. . . your work is what I aspire to.

Jessica Amy LeBlanc's picture

Beautiful... :)

J M's picture

I totally loved this title!!!!!

Gena Letson's picture

captivating...beautiful words!

Edwin Robinette's picture

I enjoyed this one much! Nice going!

gentle's picture

I am assuming that the title is supposed to say everything? If that is the case, you have the most unique & interesting writing style, I have ever read. Thanks for posting Amy


Gentle is the night♥