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The stars among us
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old poems There are many stars big ones, small ones, bright ones, dim ones, As I look at them gazing at their beauty I look over and see my love, nothing, not even the stars can steal her beauty, She is my star, shes one of the many stars among us, She lives for the stars, ones in skys, ones in our world, she loves the stars becouse of that beauty that lives in them. Their many shapes give us all our noledge of them. But yet she still trys to find more in them. Im hoping she found it in me. Im hoping I can be one of the stars among us.
great piece but one misspell, the word is k-n-o-w-le-d-g-e not noledge
This is beautiful!
Starward
hey josh
whats up boy well hey i love this poem its totally sweet and awsome but yea well keep writing dont stop just because other people dont like it okay just trust me ill always like your poetry but yea well uhm i love you and cant wait to talk to you again well ne way if you wanna write me its 905 colorado Glidden tx 78943 love you buh byes
hey josh this Karla and I am 17 and live in Auburn IL and i love this poem it is very good you are very good at what you do :-)
Yours Truly
Karla white yo git a hold of you can write me at 120-s- harris st
Auburn IL,62615
Josh, Okay maybe friends shouldn't critique poetry, but what the Hell rule are made to be broken. I like this poem for it's feeling. It's real, not just a load of bull. I hope she found it in you too, because if she didn't, she should have. I see it there. Love you Josh. Keep writing with your soul. Love always, your psycho friend Amber
it was so
beautifull
just had to
read it again
one more time
well done on this one :*)
BEAUTIFULL
POEM
I LOVE TO
LOOK AT
THE STARS TO :*) .