Did I Miss Anything?

No Nothing. I sat in my bedroom staring at the ceiling waiting for you to come back. I looked at my watch and counted about.. 23 years of staring. I think it's a new world record.

 

Yes Everything. I won the Nobel Peace Prize for my cure for cancer while simultaneously learning to juggle and getting a black belt in Karate. 

 

No Nothing. I never fell and needed a 'boo-boo' kissed or a warm hug when I cried because I fell off a bike or a boy broke my heart.

 

Yes Everything. I became the youngest person to walk on the moon and I sent you a picture. You must not have gotten it.

 

No Nothing. At no part in my life did I require the loyalty, love, or lessons that a father teaches his daughter so that she knows how to treat herself and to allow others to treat her.

 

Yes Everything. I terra-formed a new world [which I discovered]  thus solving this overpopulation problem and ending the strain to our planet. Everyone got their boarding pass to go. Now we are all off to begin a new life.

 

Unfortunately the shuttle tickets were only available for 23 years and in one place.

 

But you weren't there.

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a.griffiths57's picture

    nice tale but missing

 

 

nice tale but missing someone close who couldn't make it, leaves a dissapointing feeling about this prose.  Whilst arguing the negative and positive values of life why only 23 years to vacate this planet for another? But a good argument and perspective. Well written and argued, a good read.


 

 

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