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Show Me The Way
As the light of day surrenders to the dark of night
An eerie silence settles separating night from day
The shadows thicken into a pool of pitch-black
And the beast in all men roams forth
Most are lost in a closed eye state of slumber
Others are trapped in the horror of self-made nightmare
But I float on the waves that mark the night's wind
For I am made buoyant by an emotional mind molding sound
It bathes me and guides my nights crossings
Each trip is unique though the response of a single source
It is this source of sound I wish to praise
For it guarantees my safety from the shores of night
And promises tomorrow will be a better day
It's the pounding of my heart that notices the way
What I didn't like..
Are you kidding me?
With lines like:
"And the beast in all men roams forth
Most are lost in a closed eye state of slumber
Others are trapped in the horror of self-made nightmare
But I float on the waves that mark the night's wind"
THAT?!?
What's not to like?
Like?!? Ugh?!?
What's not to love?
Brilliantly portrayed.
Light, and night.
Dark, and day.
=^.^=
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Thanks im really glad you
Thanks im really glad you enjoyed it, make sure to read the rest of my work, some are better than others.
This poem is really good,
This poem is really good, and your right tomarrow will be a better day then today. Its new, and best thing is, you deside what happens :).
Keep listenin to that pounding of your heart, and let it lead you, down the dark path, into the light.
-Elfy*
thanks
thanks
It's very beautiful and for
It's very beautiful and for me synchronous since a book by William Kent Krueger
has a character who is Native American named Night Wind.
Thanks for the comment it is
Thanks for the comment it is appreciated.