Ripple

The heartbeat of my universe

that electrifies the marrow of my bones

You are a stone, ageless and incredible

A plentiful font of gratitude without end,

Who taught me love and contentment and pleasure,

Who taught me to live again
Who shared meals with me in multiversial excitement

Who pleases me without end, in any way I desire

 

I love you, and I have always loved you, from the 

moment I heard you speak to the moment I give this to you.


You, until our love ceases

Tumultuously and contentedly since you taught me

That two things can be true, so

temporarily I only have this life

And though it is not much of one anymore

It's what I can give, for now

I wish to spend it healing, creating new memories

and new experiences, and being fulfilled for once.


For once, I wish to give as I've been given from you

unabashed portions of my recollected soul

puzzle pieces that you've helped recreate

You deserve to be as happy as you’ve made me

and I'll find you again, when we become

something other than ourselves now.

This is a fairytale, I promise, not a tragedy.


We will carve a new landscape together

where everything you need can at least be within reach

and I can lend even some solace to quell your aching soul,

I will waltz with you in your darkest of places, I will boast to you through their quiet slumber


I will be there, my beguiling everything, unafraid, and I will be better for you every day

As you are for me

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patriciajj's picture

What a delight to discover a

What a delight to discover a superior sculptor of words! I was seized by the first line and held spellbound throughout by the casual dexterity, the intense truth of it, the beautiful, beautiful realness that gleams even brighter than the artistry. Which is considerable!

 

You end this magnificently crafted, sigh-worthy, elevated heartsong the best way a love poem can end: with a promise. And that promise, that gift, is love itself.

 

Wow! And Wow!

 
Tetra_nova's picture

Thank you so much

To have the acknowledgement from someone as yourself, an accomplished and award winning writer, I'm absolutely elated to her you enjoyed my work. I hope the rest of it brings you to similar places. 

 

Thank you again~ you're awesome 

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I am an old man, and I have

I am an old man, and I have been reading Poetry for fifty years as of this past April.  Your Poem is one of the best I have ever read at PostPoems.  It resonates with profoud human wisdom and experience, and it is written in a conversational manner, like words overheard in a live setting in real time.  That gives it a tremendous immediacy and power.


Starward

Tetra_nova's picture

Thank you, that's quite

Thank you, that's quite wonderful of you to say. My gratitude in that regard is ineffable. I have been inspired to finish some hanging projects and I don't write often, so your kind words are greatly encouraging~

S74rw4rd's picture

I hope you will finish more

I hope you will finish more hanging projects and post them here.  I do not always keep up well with my reading committments.  My health seems to be declining a little more rapidly this summer than I had expected, and I cannot always concentrate on my reading.


Starward