Uninspired

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I really wanted to write better poem

but I'm feeling totally uninspired.

Perhaps doing too much of nothing,

Has really made me tired.



You've been the only thing on my mind,

all night and all day,

Just thinking about you,

takes all my fears away.



You make me happy,

I hope my parents will see that,

You make me feel like a million bucks,

even though I know that I'm fat.












Author's Notes/Comments: 

Kinda what I'm feeling now. Still in search of the perfect poem, but well, that's not gonna happen anytime soon!

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Shawn DarDar's picture

The fact that even though u felt uninspired and still managed to pull this out says a lot. The perfect poem is not the same to everyone. But the more u write the easier it gets to convert feelings to words. And then u start to get more creative, adding more lines, and just tweaking a poem till u just can't tweak it anymore. Don't worry, your perfect poem will come, just keep writing.

Tim / manatee Marshall's picture

HEY SWEETIE, -WHY I SMILE- is a perfect poem,under anyones law or rule.