Reflections (Dont Judge Me)

Dont judge me from the outside
What you cant see lives on the inside
I may act tough or voice out loud
And for that I am proud

I get angry at life,
I can embrace with a fight,
For I am as human as can be
So don't judge the bad side of me

We are all an open book, fairytale or a crook
A beginning and a end,
Reserve your pathetic thoughts
for my dignity I will defend

Each life is something Special
That only some can share,
If trouble comes a knocking
Appreciate with care

That little child inside
and my soul strong as can be
Can never be destroyed
What Belongs to God and me

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I had to update my last version as it didnt play through right, I hope this one does though I think it needs more depth

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SSmoothie's picture

I LOVE THIS!

yes we are all things
and all things in us
but strong or weak
the soul will keep
it is a joy to see strength
as it should be
not an ego but a
proud confidence
of a child mastering
a new found game!
thanks SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."

facethetruth2b's picture

A little more depth asif ..I

A little more depth asif ..I like it and can relate..People like to judge befor ethey really know and it is sad that they wont give others a chance to show them who you really are ...


you laugh at me because I am differant, I laugh at you because You are all the same ...(KoRn) J.D......