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Silent Skies.
All countryside now brown
plaid, dressed
in quiet comfort lies.
Time fold's in upon itself,
fall's gentle on the mind.
Here silence steps
through noon-day skies.
Where past and present
breathe the hour,
and time flows undefined.
Nice composition Ma'am
time flows undefined.
©bishu
Thank you bishu, you're very
Thank you bishu, you're very kind :)
You made me feel as if I were
You made me feel as if I were in some eternity, and I do think that was the goal you intended, awesome job!
We'll just keep writing 'til there's nothing left to write.
We'll just keep waiting 'til they read all our works left to right.
Hello Sky, I am so glad you
Hello Sky, I am so glad you felt that, as it was indeed my intention. Thank you
for such a lovely comment. :-) .
Time & Sky
Lovely poem, peaceful - Lady A
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Thank you Lady A, it was
Thank you Lady A, it was indeed a peaceful day, ' other worldly ' almost. Sue x