Untitled -- 8.31.2004

So I guess you didn’t feel it

when I fell

I’ve been intricately loving you

But I guess you couldn’t tell

Falling for your mind

Craving just to feel you once more

I’ll let you walk inside

Just to show you where you have been

I’ll take you there… again

Inside of me

To deep to feel

And to deep to see

Losing sight everything I know

Learning how to hang on

And just when to let go

Realizing now how to move on and how to take control

Do you feel the sun rising and the moon setting at night?

Do you wish that I was there a fire to ignite?

Let the flames burn as our time together yearns

Feel the moving of the earth

Breathe slowly as it turns

Realize that I left you with an offer and wiling to love

But hold on to the time shared

As you fit me like a hand inside a glove

I’m sorry if you feel regret

But please do not forget

Enter the path you traveled down once more

Find me where you left me wound up in my mind

Just like I was before

Tangled in my dreams wrapped up in my heart

Tie myself around you

And I’ll take you apart

Just to taste your love

To feel your strength

Everything you are

A thousand shooting stars

Hold me close to you

So tight that you feel numb

Melt your self to fit my presence

....Then taste and feel my absence

As my image disappears

Picture me there

Clear

To evolve your mind into my soul

But what you visualize is gone

because I end

Here.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Im focusing right now on changing the style of my writting...I guess this is just practice just wanted to see what Id come up with.

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i love this poem